By popular demand, and following my posts 10 deadly CV sins and give your resume a facelift, I’ll share some useful tips on how to write a winning cover letter.
Many people believe that a cover letter should provide a summary of their resume, which is not the case. To the contrary, a good cover letter gives its reader information that can’t be found in the applicant’s CV and that intrigues the employer enough to read on.
Yes, you should! Sending a resume out without a cover letter is comparable to being judged in court without being defended by a lawyer.
A cover letter gives you the opportunity to make an impression and give the reader information about why they should hire you, something that is often hard to express in a resume.
Also, if you are too lazy to write an accompanying letter, you are probably too lazy for the job too.
General tips that apply to all type of cover letters
- Address your letter to a specific person rather than using “to whom it may concern” or “HR department”. If you don’t have a name, you can easily find out with a simple phone call.
- List your contact details.
- Make sure your letter is visually appealing, be consistent and use a style that is in line with your CV by using the same font, spacing, etc.
- Make sure your letter is error free: one spelling mistake can discount years of relevant experience. Have a second set of eyes look over your letter – ask a friend or family member – you can’t proof read your own work!
- Start with a strong opening sentence that catches the reader’s attention. Don’t use “please find attached my resume for the position of..” or “I read your advertisement for.. with great interest”.
- Research the company. There is so much information available online, use it! Referring to current projects, company values or news items in your letter demonstrates that you are genuinely interested in the company and invested some time in learning more about it.
- A cover letter is not an autobiography, keep it to one page.
- Analyse the job and demonstrate how you match the requirements, don’t make assumptions.
- Don’t use the same cover letter over and over; change it dependent on the role you apply for. By simply editing some keywords and paragraphs you can personalise it in no time.
- Don’t tell the employer why the job is important to you, but talk about which experience and skills you can bring to the job instead.
- Don’t plead with the hiring manager or beg for the role. Give them the impression that they need you, not the other way around. It’s good to use a closing line and thank the reader of your letter but you don’t want to sound desperate.
Types of cover letters
There are several types of cover letters and although the approach of each of them is slightly different, the all have one thing in common: aiming to impress, getting the employer excited about you.
Whilst I don’t want to go into detail about all types of cover letters I can think of (letter to a Headhunter, a Venture Capitalist, a Consulting firm, etc), I want to highlight a few of the letters that are commonly used and list some tips you can easily apply.
Responding to an advert
This type of letter is written in response to an advertised role, whether in a news paper, on the employer’s website, online or through any other media.
- Make sure you list the role you apply for. If a reference is mentioned in the advert, use it in your letter. Use it preferably at the beginning of your letter so the hiring manager doesn’t need to start skimming through the letter or look at your resume to figure out which role you could be applying for.
You can either use “Subject: Application for Senior Reservoir Engineer, ref 2009/124BP” at the top of your letter or include the job title in your opening sentence. - List where you found out about the role, some employers list their vacancies on various websites.
- Make sure you follow instructions mentioned in the advert. If it says to send your resume and a cover letter mentioning why you qualify for the role and to include 2 references, do so!
- If you are addressing your letter to a Recruitment Consultant or Headhunter, make sure you use “your client” rather than “your company”; it demonstrates that you know who you are talking to.
This is the equivalent of a “cold-call”. You express your interest to a specific company not knowing whether the company currently has vacancies matching your profile.
- Research the company beforehand so that you have an idea of what they’re looking for and can sell your skills in a specific, focused way.
- Make it clear, at the beginning of your letter that you are enquiring whether a position is available.
- Be clear about what kind of position you’re looking for. An employer shouldn’t have to guess what type of roles you are considering.
- If you are addressing your letter to the HQ’s of an international organisation, mention which locations you would consider moving to and whether you would envisage travel.
This letter is addressed to a specific person within a company or agency, at the recommendation of someone else. It can be used to apply for a specific role (similar to the response to an advert) or to apply for any job within a particular company (open application). The difference is that you use someone else’s name to get your foot in the door.
- Make sure your referral is aware that you will use his/her name
- Always mention the name of the person who referred you and their relation to the addressee.
- Make sure that the person you mention in your letter is immediately recognisable to the employer
- Only use a contact that is relevant to and well respected by the reader
Some examples of do’s and don’ts
| Don’t write: | Instead, write: | |
| I read your advertisement for a “Senior Sales Manager” on Monster with great interest and have attached my resume for your consideration. | With a stellar track record of increasing market share, profitability and customer satisfaction, it is a pleasure to submit my resume for the Senior Sales Manager role you advertised on Monster. | |
| I am very interested in working for your company and the requirements of the role match my aspirations. | Your company’s mission of growing sales and exceeding customer expectations within an efficient, high energy environment is consistent with my career goals. | |
| Thank you for your time and for considering me as a candidate. I am available for an interview at any time and look forward to hearing from you soon. | I appreciate your time and look forward to discussing your objectives and how we can work together to accomplish them. | |
| I have attached my resume, which will clearly demonstrate why I qualify for this role. | Enclosed is my resume, which will give you an in-depth look at my accomplishments and an idea of my potential. | |
| I came to know from a friend of mine that you are looking for a Junior Geologist. | A good friend of mine, Joe Bloggs, who has been working with your organisation as a Project Manager for over 4 years, informed me about your vacancy for a Junior Geologist. | |
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Great post Boo! I like the examples with the do’s and don’ts, as well as Tip #11. Definitely agree that cover letters need to be framed in terms of why the company needs you and not the other way around.
I put together a page full of additional cover letter tips if you’re interested.
http://www.mahalo.com/how-to-write-a-cover-letter
Best,
Ron